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Puzzling Citation

http://www.tuck.puzzlehistory.info/history.htm may seem to be off subject for this article. However, by comparing it with the accompanying citation linked to Time magazine, the date of Piccio's divorce can be ascertained.

Georgejdorner (talk) 10:41, 27 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Sourcing complete

All facts in this iteration of the article have been referenced to source. Georgejdorner (talk) 03:41, 15 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, George. I've reviewed the article and feel that it is still a Start class article, unfortunately. The only issue is the citations. The rule of thumb is one per paragraph and even though I accept what you are saying about citing at each change of source, if someone comes to the article later on they might not know this. As such I feel that you need to add in citations to each paragraph, even if they are duplicating other citations (just use the WP:NAMEDREFS format).

Some other improvements might be (but B class is not dependent upon them):

format the citations and references using {{cite web}} and {{cite book}};
consolidate some of the short/single sentence paragraphs into larger ones;
add a biographical infobox {{Infobox Military Person}}.

Hope this helps. Good work so far, by the way. — AustralianRupert (talk) 01:37, 24 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]